Autumn allegro,
perhaps that’s why
I love it so
coming as such a lovely death
flaming, raging, mellowing
then cooling, greying
decaying,
diminuendo
This is for the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads where Margaret Bednar asked us to revisit an old writing prompt. The one I chose is by Laurie Kolp, A Word with Laurie. She asked us to write eight lines in one minute and include the word, “allegro” (which appropirately enough means “briskly” in music talk).
Beautifully described.
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Thanks Rosemary.
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“coming as such a lovely death” … you’re right, The lines after are perfect.
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Thank you so much!
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beautiful writing.
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It doesn’t last long – I try to time my mountain visit so I see the best color – and I often fail. BUT soon I will be living in the mountains and it won’t be a problem anymore.
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How wonderful Margaret!
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Oh I love that soft diminuendo … The colors are coming soon.
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Thank you Bjorn. They are coming soon here too.
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“coming as such a lovely death”…ah this is truly autumn…beautiful!…
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This is beautiful, Mary.
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What an artistic synopsis of the fall season…beautiful
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Thank you Susie.
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Wow. 🙂
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Thanks!
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Mary, this is so lovely .. the last word the perfect counterpoint to your first line.
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Thank you Helen!
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Just about everyone picked this to re-visit! How did that happen? Very nice work!
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No idea, but thanks Bekkie.
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I love your choice of words and brevity…it paints a clear picture!
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Thank you Hannah.
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A real distilled sparkler here, Mary…
“such a lovely death…
decaying,
diminuendo” Perfect! With Best Wishes Scott
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Thank you Scott! And all the best to you.
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