Saturday morning
I’m sitting in
my comfy chair
with coffee, computer
cat and dog,
sun shining
through the cold.
I turn up the heat
then settle back down
to write
Downtown
a bleary woman
wakes in a stairwell.
It smells of piss
but where else
was she supposed to go?
She starts to gather
bag and blanket.
It’s colder on the street
but she needs to move
before the cops
come round
Is this shocking to you, or commonplace? I think it can be easy to just sort of let it slide right by our consciousness. I live in the middle of nowhere, but in the small city closest to me, homelessness is increasingly becoming a problem. Unfortunately, it seems to be most problematic when homeless folks choose inconvenient places to stay.
Thanks to Mama Zen who made me think about it when she asked us to write about something shocking, in 77 words or less, over at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads.
I totally agree… Not shocking enough… A couple of years this was unheard of in Sweden.. But these days it seems to better on our streets than in other places of the world… Something is really broken.
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You are very right, and the poem describes the dichotomies well, even though the enjoyment of the first woman is modest enough–I mean–there are far crazier discrepancies in the culture–but this makes your points well–thanks. k.
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Too much of that going around.
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Yikes! Would you edit that? “going” not “gooing,” which sounds rather disrespectful. xo Thanks, Mary!
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Got it, Jamie! xx
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Bless you.
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Thnaks!
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The contrast makes the homeless woman’s situation show up starkly – the distance between their two worlds. Makes one think of the back stories that must have happened, to have each woman end up in such different circumstances. Well done.
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This makes such a strong point. We’re not shocked enough.
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Nice, Mary. Yes, I think we are accustomed to seeing similar sights to what you write of, even in the smaller towns. There are tricks to the trade of being homeless that one must learn.
We visited three Caribbean Islands, St. Lucia, Barbados, and Martinique. Of the three Martinique, French, was the one without the look of poverty. But then France is very Socialist, Martinique is well taken care of (we haven’t seen people sleeping on the subway stairs there either). B Sanders may have what modern society needs?
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Last time I looked I had said, “in Paris we haven’t seen people sleeping on the subway stairs …” The first part got taken away some how. Sorry.
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I think so – if the congress will allow him to implement any of it.
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Got it now, Jim. Thanks for your comment.
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We should be shocked. I once hunted the streets for runaways. There is much darkness in dark streets.We should never just accept the are homeless among us.
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I want it to be shocking. But living in New York City, this is certainly not shocking enough… and is very sad.
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Mary thank you for writing this and at least starting a conversation among some of us, lucky enough to have a home- in the place I live, I don’t see homeless people but in my home country, there is plenty of it. AS a child I used to think, they liked to live outdoors and enjoyed the outdoor life but when I visited the US, a couple of times, the stark reality of homelessness struck me. People had all their worldly belongings in one trolley bag and they moved in and out of the railroad stations depending on when the police came on their rounds.
Susie
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Thank you Susie. It really is a sad thing, that in the richest country in the world people go homeless. And I know, it’s not as simple as it first appears, but…
And, just out of curiosity, what is your home country?
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Mary, what is your email – is it on your site – I’ll email you.
Susie
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mary3bach@gmail.com
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