Artist: Claudia Schoenfeld Used with Permission
Deep chocolate bass
strawberry studded percussion
with creamy vanilla coronet
Romulus, Remus and I
We were just fiddling around,
working on our Neapolitan jam
Who let the dogs in?
This is a little fun for dVerse Poets Pub. Click on the link and check it out.
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hmmm – chocolate bass – makes me lick my lips in expectation… and your last line made me laugh out loud… good one mary
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Thanks Claudia. I’m glad you’re well. It’s good to hear about your latest and greatest life! xx
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Oh, such delicious FUN…I like how you played this!
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lovely, lovely 🙂
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Whistles!! ❤ I love the playfulness of this sevenling 😀 and that last line is just wow! Kudos 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Haha. The last line made me chuckle. The first stanza made me hungry.
So you are hanging out with the founders of Rome?
Fun piece Mary…
and good to see you.
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Lol, well the colors made me think of Neapolitan ice cream, and so I sort of went with and Italian thing.
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Yum, this is so fun. Love how you tied in all the culinary delights, Mary.
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Just as my senses began to in the flavors of ice cream, and I began to sit back and relax, the last line pulled me back. And this experience reminds me if those times when I thought I had time for myself and then my baby wakes up and cries. 😊
So I say, you established the mood very well here.
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Very fun!
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Wonderful fun! Thanks for the smile!
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The first part made me hungry, smiles. Hey, I didn’t noticed the dogs in the painting. Love the fun ending Mary.
Thanks for joining us in our celebration.
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You had me at the chocolate! Love this one, Mary!
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What a fun, delicious poem! Chocolate, vanilla, and strawberry….neopolitan – yes! Really really good.
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Love the incorporation of taste within the music…and a perfect ending with the dogs!
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