4 thoughts on “21

  1. I get that you think it needs work. Doesn’t sit quite ‘right’?
    I like it a lot. Few words that say so much. Bringing clear images and feelings. I love the last two lines
    ‘spring thaws may bring calamity
    when hearts grow apart’.
    Resonate perfectly for me.

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