Some years
the ice goes out dramatically
with much noise and damage
spring thaws may bring calamity
when hearts grow apart
Needs work, but I’mm sooo behind.
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I get that you think it needs work. Doesn’t sit quite ‘right’?
I like it a lot. Few words that say so much. Bringing clear images and feelings. I love the last two lines
‘spring thaws may bring calamity
when hearts grow apart’.
Resonate perfectly for me.
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Thanks very much, Arati. I just need some time to sit and “noodle” with it. And with most of these from April.
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love this expression “noodle”. I may borrow it. Reminds me of when I used to paint. ‘noodling’ definitely happened a lot.
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Of course, lol. I don’t remember where I first heard it, but you’re welcome to use it. I can imagine noodling with a painting. 🙂
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