Some years
the ice goes out dramatically
with much noise and damage
spring thaws may bring calamity
when hearts grow apart
Needs work, but I’mm sooo behind.
Some years
the ice goes out dramatically
with much noise and damage
spring thaws may bring calamity
when hearts grow apart
Needs work, but I’mm sooo behind.
I get that you think it needs work. Doesn’t sit quite ‘right’?
I like it a lot. Few words that say so much. Bringing clear images and feelings. I love the last two lines
‘spring thaws may bring calamity
when hearts grow apart’.
Resonate perfectly for me.
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Thanks very much, Arati. I just need some time to sit and “noodle” with it. And with most of these from April.
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love this expression “noodle”. I may borrow it. Reminds me of when I used to paint. ‘noodling’ definitely happened a lot.
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Of course, lol. I don’t remember where I first heard it, but you’re welcome to use it. I can imagine noodling with a painting. 🙂
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